My new poem called a rose?

but its petals haven't rose



let the rain give it a drink



and the sun dry it from a shower



two weeks later



the rose is fully grown



you can smell its sweet scent



it has a wonderful aroma of love



now the rose is doing a petal dance



spreading its smell around



its smell of peace and love



and we can witness its lovely gift

My new poem called a rose?
A fine effort but Jimmy B's comments should be followed. You have a start here but lines like "two weeks later" and "but its petals haven't rose" take away from your impact. Good luck.
Reply:it just needs a bit more work that's all.
Reply:It IS a bit simple yes..

Consider adding in some literary devices.

Metaphors, similies and personification would all work well with the subject matter.
Reply:Not bad, rather simple though